Read this as it seemed short. Plot of story was interesting however I had a few issues with it.
Language, very southern/redneck (ya’ll etc.)
Drug use. Addict did not act like a addict especially considering that particular narcotic.
Ending. Kind of sucked. Felt rushed and characters personalities was a complete 180. Like the author wanted a happy ending so now everything is ok and lets walk into the sunset towards a bright future.
If the story was a little more realistic (especially the drug usage) it would have been much better
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Read this as it seemed short. Plot of story was interesting however I had a few issues with it.
Language, very southern/redneck (ya’ll etc.)
Drug use. Addict did not act like a addict especially considering that particular narcotic.
Ending. Kind of sucked. Felt rushed and characters personalities was a complete 180. Like the author wanted a happy ending so now everything is ok and lets walk into the sunset towards a bright future.
If the story was a little more realistic (especially the drug usage) it would have been much better
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a world not their own . . . like Cross Channel or something? Quite the harem in this one; addict, prostitute, orphan. I amm intrigued.